All Comments on 'I Can Do Better Than That....'

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northlandernorthlanderover 13 years ago
Quite a First

Raage

An excellent first effort. which deserves to be further explored in other stories. Lots of potential branches

Romantic1Romantic1over 13 years ago
Great job. Here's another 'film' story

Try this. I had a lot of fun writing it. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=384602

Regards,

Romantic1

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