by onwardbob
I'm really enjoying this series. I hope you will poat the next chapter soon.
I like the story idea. but it was hard to read.
Too many, 'Well, and; Yeah, well; Sure, and; And what do you say.'
Unless you're quoting someone or writing dialog sentences should never begin with 'And'.
Keep writing.
To those of us, who had no sister , you have done a goood job with our sister fantasy. The pokeher party sounds like more fun in the house. I hope his sister will share Julie with the boys. Like Julie would complain!
Lol, yeah, like Id let my buddies anywhere near that, lol!
The anal sex was pretty unrealistic, but I guess thats seems about typical on here, even if it is fiction, heh. The story was pretty enjoyable, though it was written in a rather strange style! I think I would have fucked my crazy sister straight off when I first caught them though, lol!
Personally every pussy I've ever eaten were shaved, waxed, lasered or for some other reason totally bare. if a girl refuses to go bared down there I refuse to eat her. I insist if a girl wants me to eat her pussy she must be bald for some reason or another.