All Comments on 'I Check Out The Checkout Girl'

You set it to CHILL??

Red should be at about room temperature!

It is white that usually needs to be chilled!!

The wine was a sweeter Concord, our hero didn't like any of the Cabs at the store...

A nice story. Maybe the reactions to the hickey at work and home can get us a sequel?

Don't end it now. More chapters, please.

I really enjoyed reading the story. I think we need a sequel.

it brought back memories that left me breathless. i don't remember when the want became a need. i want to find someone who will make it last a lifetime. i want the need once more. i have lived without it for so long because i lived his lifetime...

I've read this story somewhere before, but it's so good that I didn't mind rereading it. A second part would be great. How old is her mother? How does she react to seeing her 19year old daughter with a 30 something guy? Lots of things to explore. Great job! SS06

Sweet story. Excellent work.

Red wine in the refrigerator?

The end did not really seem like the conclusion to this story. In short it is some what an incomplete tale.

Seriously....He bonks the cashier at the local store once and falls in love with her? No way...Please at least make the end a bit believable.

I love this story. Real people not impossibly beautiful cyphers and real feelings. Have read multiple times and will read again.