I Created a Monster

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My sad tale should have ended there, but my daughter, having made it clear she was no longer afraid of me and that she never wished to see me again, uploaded my shameful acts from the cloud to a Milf site. The fallout from my amateur porn video was quick, quicker than the lawsuit to have it removed for certain. I lost my vet job and had to seek employment in another state, where I could explain away my sudden dismissal.

Someday I am sure that I will get over the pain, the hell of feeling like I am being cut to pieces. I'm still reasonably attractive and even if I don't get over Jack, I could replace him. I'm just not sure what the use would be; I've already had a marriage that I went into not fully loving my spouse and look at where that got me. I'm not as strong as Jack, for sure. Jack looked me square in the eye and told me to give him my best shot, that he could take it. I couldn't take his, that's for sure.

As far as my current 'love' life, I still have random hookups, but I am cold and dead inside emotionally. I still love a monster I created.

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AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

The angle of the story, from the cheating wife's viewpoint, was novel. But she's mostly wrong: tearing the hymen will be noticed by the man, same as the blood afterwards. He might not check on the latter, but it'll be noticed. Having said that, I'm aware that playing sports & other life activities can tear that skin. I'm sure the husband in the picture wasn't as stupid/ naive as she claims. (Yes, I know it's only a story.)

Furthermore, the wife's somewhat disturbed in her viewpoints about her life... well, life in general. And was shown that in his production of the divorce papers, along with her daughter's posting the video.

For all of that, the writing could use a little help; get a proofreader to help. Wasn't a bad story but wasn't a great one. 3 stars, & I still thank the author for writing- & not making the husband into a wimp. Bob

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Loved the way the story was told from the cheaters point of view and how Jack turned the tables on her. Kind of funny at times but it was a true BTB story. Five stars

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

One of the best story tellers on this site!

26thNC26thNC10 months ago

That was great, and the ending is almost perfect.

remb95remb9510 months ago

Liked this one and it does have the proper ending.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This has to be one of the most imaginative fantasies I've ever read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Okay, this was inventive. Perfect revenge. Daughter was just like the mother, but used her powers for good. Choices matter a lot. Husband was never stupid, just trusting. Never mistake kindness for weakness. He couldn't have orchestrated a more perfect revenge.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So happy to read a story where the lying selfish slut gets some of what she deserves. Her pain still wasn't enough, but it was better than most!

AkSh4BloOdAkSh4BloOdover 1 year ago

I would loved to see a little more elaborated one.

Too much questions aren't answered.

I love this type of stories.

But ended too soon.

smmhomesmmhomealmost 2 years ago

Thanks for the great nod to a classic cinematic character:

"Have you paid your dues, Jack? Yes, sir. The check is in the mail."

"We really shook the pillars of heaven, didn't we, Wang?"

5*

SexecutionerSexecutioneralmost 2 years ago

No...

A sociopathic bitch as described at the beginning isn't going to turn into proper wife material. As they say, "Can't make a wife out of a ho"..

alvinjfrazieralvinjfrazierabout 2 years ago

⭐⭐⭐⭐ I'm truly sorry that I only gave this story 4 stars. It is well-written. But... the wife is a TOTALLY UNREPENTANT, SCHEMING, SERIAL CHEATING WHORE! While the author told his story his way, it just didn't work for me.

mordbrandmordbrandabout 2 years agoAuthor
@potsandpans

Perhaps, she at least recognizes sarcasm. Also, you either don't live in Texas or you're simply a pedantic nimrod. People here always have called it by both names, just like Dallas Fort Worth. For your perusal: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bryan%E2%80%93College_Station. Also, perhaps to clarify the fact to discombobulated village idiots, the actual board of regents OF Texas A&M actually voted a while back to consider the metro area of Bryan College Station to be the official recognized term for home of said university.

I've lived in this area since I was 12, I am 49 now. I guarantee that anyone who has been here longer than a brief time would instantly know what someone was talking about when they used the name of that area

potsanpanspotsanpansabout 2 years ago

You should have had your wife edit the story for you. Bryan is not also known as College Station. 2 distinct towns, just next to each other.

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