All Comments on 'I Dominus - The Edification of a Slut'

Thoroughly distasteful people, the lot of them. Makes the sex rather unsexy. Consenual, yes, but hitting a woman in the face multiple times is still abusive given the ease of damage. It certainly doesn't sound as if he pulled back his strength when he smacked her. Gil doesn't give a crap about Brenda as this would certainly not result in her having power over husband and his side piece. Cheating Brenda is pot calling kettle and only really seems upset that they did it in her bed, not so much their cheating. Finally, could-NOT-care-less. You are a strong enough writer to understand and use the correct phrase, not the opposite speak of the lazy. Overall, this wasn't one of your best.

With such a large group of people you wrote them together soo well. Thank you.