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luedonluedonabout 7 years ago
Second Person and Dreams

As a general feeling about stories, I dislike second person narration and I also think that dream stories don't work well unless you are Lewis Carroll or L Frank Baum.

So this story surprised me in that I thought it was quite readable.

Lue

visioneervisioneerabout 7 years ago

Another good one. Nice work.

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