by Krosis
A good story but it only gets a 1 star on the second to around.
I do not understand the comments by Whackdoodle at the end of chapters 2 and 3. This story series seems very original and well written and deserves much better than a 1. Under what user name and title was it published a few weeks ago? Is it possible that it was published by Krosis on a different web site?