All Comments on 'I Dream of Jeanie'

Nice plot. Very well written. Different from the usual styles found in this section

Loved it.

Really a fun read!

That was a great story .Fun to read and nice ending . Thank you

This is a great story and a pretty original concept. Great job.

Too bad he didn't screw the genie but it did make a good ending.

Funny, erotic, well written. Well done

Great story! You truly have a gift for storytelling. Sexy, Hot, but also a good read.

Thank you for sharing your gift.

Damn this was a great Story really awesome

So funny!

I would like to be a fly on the wall when does tell them! "Aw shit" indeed!! Lol!

A well written and funny story....and that’s a hard combination to accomplish sometimes! More please!

I think this story could go on. Please try to write more of this.

What fun, hope there's another chapter soon..

Aw shit hahaha that was funny ending ty/

One of the very few entries here where the story had me more interested than the sex. Very well done.

Excellent story! Very well developed and kept my cock interested. Please do more!

A truly great story, well done. I gave it 5 stars.

I havnt laughed out loud and enjoyed a story that much in a long time keep it up

Great story!!! Your details left nothing but a clear vision of each person and the whole scene going on. Look forward to many more like this one!!

They should use it to give her some social skills

Hope to see this story continue...maybe into a series.

I could only see Barbara Eden as Jeanie. Increased the eroticism.

After days/weeks of reading stories finally found a sensible one to read. I hope you will make a pt.2 on it, waiting....

Perfect ending. Aw shit.

This is a great story. Another one I recommend is "The djinn in the nightingale's eye" by A. S. Byatt.

I laughed my ass off. You could have easily posted this in "Humor and Satire," but then the haters would have 1-bombed you due to the incest content. Hot sister story but the humor through your Jeanie was even better! Earned my 5 stars and left me with a smile! :)

Did you just write an entire story without using a single contraction? Not even in the dialog???

Was this on a bet?

Wow. Data would be proud. Or even the Coen brothers...

You have a "wandered" that should be "wondered", but overall it was delightful. I caught Chekhov's meter, so I wasn't surprised, but the ending was fresh and stuck to the running gag.

I love the way you nailed "careful what you wish for" without having to overtly state it.

5 stars, way up! XD

I didn’t know each master got a new wish meter. I just thought the meter would reset. Did you omit that fact because it would be too easy to figure out? A good fantasy I gave you a rare 5.

I hope it's continued one day.

All I have to say is that the surprise ending was totally unexpected and yet very much a welcome part of the story. You definitely know how to tell a good tale.

Two thumbs up because I only have two!

Dude do a part 2. This was done nice

outstanding,sex ed.,humor and a great story,question now is it possible to write a part 2 ,would love to see it

Another chapter would be nice

I'm pickier than most but the story and humor can't hide the fact that this reads like a play by play technical manual. And what's with the constant "aw shit" and cowboy boots??? Cliche much???? Ugggggh!

I like the humor and imagination > I just wish you let him fuck the genie before the end.

But we need a part 2, what will mom and say ? aw shit!!! thanks for the read

I think at one time or another all men have wished for a JEANIE. l know I have,........... THANKS it was hot

Now that you have us please continue and finish us off!

I had to fast forward the jeanie and sis episode. Other than that it was an excellent read. 5 stars.

That was fucking hilarious, and sexy as well.

Awesome story. 5 star. What would have happened if Richard & Rachel just kept on selling the lamp to each other after wish meter reaches 10%.

Different

Great story, fun read.

Wishing there was more to read but the ending fits as well as Rachel in bed.

Lol. As good as the sex was, the story is even better. Thanks for a great little interlude. Interlude? Interlewd.

Aw shit

Yes Jeanie, please tell my parents that we are both fucking my sister.

Aw shit !!!

Great story.

Thank you...