All Comments on 'I Dream of Wires'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great concept

Sneaky! Crept up on me that i was getting horny instead of creeped out by the wires!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Had me then lost me

I like subtle influence stories. This was shaping up to be a great and novel approach to that. But then you flipped into direct and total control. That lost it for me. Because it loses the sexiness if they're just a robot. I want some struggle, some resistance, some internal battle, some conflict and internal confusion. Not unconscious acceptance.

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