All Comments on 'I found a Perfect Mistress Online'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow

Thnx looking forward to reading more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
OK, but

This story was well-crafted and written well with lots of good dialog.

I would have preferred it to be less exhibitionist, with him privately building her to where she was asking for him in her, rather than the way he made her feel uncomfortable with exposure.

However, the main problem is that it did not go far enough. I want to know how things turned out for her, her son, and her schooling. How does she feel a year(?) later, when she finds out that he is married? What happens when his wife finds out (maybe that would put it in Loving Wives category)?

4 stars.

Paul in Oklahoma

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