All Comments on 'I Got Caught in Girls Underclothes Ch. 04'

Excellent work you have the knack waiting on next chapter.

Probably the most fun (and realistic) read I've found yet here on this site. It's as if you knew some of the same people I knew when I was young.

I very much look forward to coming chapters, the more, the better.

Keep up the great work.

Please write more its got really good potential 👍

This was a fun ride. I liked it better as Katy became nicer to Tyler. I was so hoping for the anal scene. Maybe you find the rest of this story. Thanks

Great, beautiful, wonderful build-up to a true story of love between two people. I eagerly look forward to the "rest of their story."

The weird wiping after sex was a major turn off. Seriously, she manipulates her brother into sex but the natural result is gross...?

Hey, loving the story so far but I have a little constructive feedback, which I hope will help with your future works.

First of all, a very minor - but still important - point: the sister's name is spelled as "Katie" in this chapter and "Katy" in previous episodes. Try to maintain consistency throughout the story.

Also, you use the word "forced" or "forcing" quite a lot in this story (and this chapter in particular). If you're trying to give an impression of a loving brother and sister exploring and enjoying each other's bodies, this word should have no place in the story whatsoever. Try to use terms that convey the feeling you're going for - have her "gently guide" his hand, or "press" his finger into her, for example. Tyler specifically describes their sex as making love, as opposed to fucking, so try to use terms that are consistent with that.

Hope this helps, I'm looking forward to enjoying the rest of the story!