All Comments on 'I Had to Fuck for Money to Get Home'

Your dialogue is terrible. People don't talk like that. Listen to real people and learn how they actually talk.

No human being would ever say ""Disrobe my partner before you are allowed to touch our members."

Apart from that, your story is a load of racist crap with every cliché possible..

I strongly disagree with the last feedback. People with a different base language might talk that way when using poor English. Good story.

Most of us have had to do this at least once in our lives. xoxoxoxo Annette

Short and sweet.

Jennifer's a keeper!

❤

"Renee stood and dropped his pants. His cock was not really big..."

That's because "Renée" is female. "René" is male.

If "né (m)" and "née" (f) mean "born" en français, then "René" is "reborn". The repeated use of a female name here is a distraction, given the context.