by JonnyBtm
Please continue!!!....it was amazing to read!!!...Your writing is beautiful!
Beautiful writing..look at Dex being so demanding and Adam being so sweet..love them..
Have loved both of your stories. Please continue! You're writing is very sexy
So many times the supposed bully really loves the object of his hatred. It is no surprise that Adam turns into a very loving young man, and shows Dex just how much that wonderful Italian hairy body can become a love machine. I love the description of the hairy abs. I am assuming there is abundant hair on the masculine and muscular chest as well, and sensitive nipples under the layer of hair. Maybe even hair licking its way up the Adam's apple, and showing at the collar of his shirt. Keep up this good wiring!
This story is great and well written. Really enjoyed reading it.
I would enjoy reading about their continued exploits as they face the world as a couple.
Good story but one thing that I raised an eyebrow at. First time hurts like a mother f. Even with prep it still hurts a little. Burns. So the fact that Will was able to take something depicted as HUGE and not feel any pain was hard to believe.
Other than that...really hot ending.
TM
It was amazing how Dex hated him and then loved him. I could just feel that big monster sliding into me. I would love to try one that big.
You are really good writer. Good dialogue, good characters, and great since of humor! Plus the sex is insanely hot.
Have now read all three of your stories. Would really like to see follow-up chapters to the first two. The sex is so hot! Keeps me hard. Please continue to write.
awesome and hot story....... you need to write more. This has got to be one of the best ones on here
What a delight to see their love develop as they work through their high school years. the bully really doesn't hate Dex, and Dex doesn't hate Adam. Once they reach this sexy stage, it is easy to say they love each other. Keep it up!
I have read all three of your stories and this one was hot hot hot! I wish you were still writing as you are gifted!
I couldn't get past Adam's behavior at the beginning. Picking on someone is one thing, shoving them to the ground and calling them a faggot with no provocation is something else. I believe the term is 'hate crime' actually. Then Dex is blaming himself for not realizing the raging homophobe is actually gay? As if all should be forgiven because Adam couldn't bring himself out of the closet. Yeah, fuck that noise.
I've read other bully-turned-lover stories and enjoyed them, but I couldn't find it in myself to root for the bully this time around. Adam is just a jerk, plain and simple. And his shitty home life doesn't excuse that.
You just bring the characters to life, I relish how they just come together. I can almost feel the electricity between the characters
Loved this story. Felt very real and personal. I really liked the casual story telling style, felt like Dex was narrating to the reader. Doesn't seem like you're still writing, which is a real shame. Would love to see you back!
Truly enjoyed the from the start till the very end. It was nice how you gave us a quick description of Adam at the beginning of your story. Reading the story and realizing how the relationship changed between you and Adam so (very real).
I really respect how you end your stories. I've written a few and probably try too hard to provide some sort of closure. Yours conclude more abruptly but also more effectively. There's a slight tease of sex-to-come, which is hot, but you don't drone on about how they live happily ever after, which isn't. Love your writing!
I loved this story, admittedly stumbled onto it after searching all day for a similar story about kids that hated each other since like kindergarten, called the other one Yank/Yankee or something like that...Please if anyone knows it let me know.
Love this story, very hot indeed. I just hope I can get into their story as to why Adam is a bully to him and show how soft he can truly be. 10/10
It wouldf be nice to find out what comes next & reach a point where Dex gets to fuck Adam as well.
This shot right into my top ten faves. Maybe top 5. I was bullied a bit as a lad, and I always just boiled w/ hate for them for it. It's always interesting to see what it could've been like if my hatred and their bullying had gotten derailed. Flipped into a love/sex kind of a thing. I totally identified w/ Dex. Great job!
"I was flailing around the bed like Linda Blair".
This might just be the best story I have read on this site.
I can't think of another time I have read anything so hot and funny.
It’s kinda of sad when you come across a great story years after it’s been posted, get to the end and wished the author had written a series with the same characters. You just wished you read it minutes after they posted it so your comment would encourage them to write another chapter. If you there is any chance you still visit this site and read these comments please could you write another chapter.
"Wait, he'd need to have friends for that." Fucking ace man, hot, sexy and funny loved every word of it
What the last 4 guys said! What a great love story about hanging in there and making it happen. The fragility of both guys and their connection makes their success in connecting so special. Not to mention the amazingly hot way they connect when the time finally comes. Thank you. I read this story before and marked it as a favorite. Today I looked at the title and drew a blank. So I got to discover it's quality again. Definitely a favorite!
Like Russ4D, this reading was my second time around. You are one of the bestest writers here, an amazing talent. Kudos!
A pretty amazing story with lots of hot steamy sex and touches of humor (I was flailing around the bed like Linda Blair). You’re a great writer.