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He rubbed her shoulders gently for nearly an hour, stroked her arm, kissed her head repeatedly. When she started to get up to get some water to wash down the salty popcorn, he leapt from the couch and insisted on getting it for her.
Divine Tantra had turned her boyfriend into a considerate gentleman.
But how would he react to the next part?
- COMMENTS
Anonymous10 months agoLove the premise, narration, dialogue, the writing. The thought patterns and emotions of both people seem very true-to-life. Can’t wait to read the next installment. Also can’t figure out how I have not found the story until now. Maybe because I’ve been looking up “wife dominant”. I want stories of female domination between two people who love, trust, and have respect, each for the other. Thanks to the author for engaging writing. J.
Anonymousover 9 years agoI read the whole series. Wow! The author really nailed the doubt, fear, desire, and love that are all tangled up in a FLR. The sex in it is good but is secondary to the changing relationship. It mostly sounds realistic, with the main characters trying to ride a wave and not get their relationship smashed on the rocks. Like most good fiction, it hints about most things rather than hitting you over the head with them. This is the best fictional account of such a dynamic.
I tried to interest my girlfriend in college in exploring this area, but it was too much for her.
DannyBoy570about 10 years agoThe style was easy and pleasant to read. I particulary like the third person usage and the ratio between dialogs and narrative parts.
For the story itself, I was surprised by the diversity of the situations (texting and checkpoints) and unusual diversity/deepth of conversations.
I greatly appreciate the story as a fiction, at first I didn't like to see Ella taking advice from someone else (kinda out of place) but with hindsight it couldn't have been otherwise considering she is new plus it allows the reader to be ahead of Jim.
Just as anon said "your grasp of the essence of female control is excellent" getting really tired of " *whip* *whip* submit now ! *whip* *whip*"
