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He rubbed her shoulders gently for nearly an hour, stroked her arm, kissed her head repeatedly. When she started to get up to get some water to wash down the salty popcorn, he leapt from the couch and insisted on getting it for her.
Divine Tantra had turned her boyfriend into a considerate gentleman.
But how would he react to the next part?
- COMMENTS
Anonymous11 months agoLove the premise, narration, dialogue, the writing. The thought patterns and emotions of both people seem very true-to-life. Can’t wait to read the next installment. Also can’t figure out how I have not found the story until now. Maybe because I’ve been looking up “wife dominant”. I want stories of female domination between two people who love, trust, and have respect, each for the other. Thanks to the author for engaging writing. J.
Anonymousover 9 years agoI read the whole series. Wow! The author really nailed the doubt, fear, desire, and love that are all tangled up in a FLR. The sex in it is good but is secondary to the changing relationship. It mostly sounds realistic, with the main characters trying to ride a wave and not get their relationship smashed on the rocks. Like most good fiction, it hints about most things rather than hitting you over the head with them. This is the best fictional account of such a dynamic.
I tried to interest my girlfriend in college in exploring this area, but it was too much for her.
DannyBoy570about 10 years agoThe style was easy and pleasant to read. I particulary like the third person usage and the ratio between dialogs and narrative parts.
For the story itself, I was surprised by the diversity of the situations (texting and checkpoints) and unusual diversity/deepth of conversations.
I greatly appreciate the story as a fiction, at first I didn't like to see Ella taking advice from someone else (kinda out of place) but with hindsight it couldn't have been otherwise considering she is new plus it allows the reader to be ahead of Jim.
Just as anon said "your grasp of the essence of female control is excellent" getting really tired of " *whip* *whip* submit now ! *whip* *whip*"
Anonymousover 10 years agostories on the site. I don't know how I missed it for so long. The confusion of person (I/he etc.) should be edited out before posting but your grasp of the essence of female control is excellent.
Harry_Ballsackalmost 12 years agoI love this so far. I am looking forward to seeing where they go with this.
Suzi_sheffieldalmost 12 years agoI love this story. You deserve more than five stars. Forget brevity. The longer the better.
1Martinimanalmost 12 years agoThis is a great opening chapter that was well written, sexy and clever. I'm a little cautious of the future, but I'm interested enough that I'm excited to read more. Not sure how many guys who are just dating a girl would go for this, as most would just find a new girlfriend, but I think you did a good enough job explaining the investment the guy had made and his reasons for playing along. Might have worked better for a married couple struggling in their marriage, but it's still good.
As for Anon below who complained about the length of the story, I'll try to be as diplomatic as possible...try reading poetry my friend. A good story takes its time and is never rushed, building up the characters, setting and plot. This story did just that, and no matter if I like the future chapters based on my own taste, this author is a very good storyteller.
