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She thought about it, considered it, looked away, crossed her arms. "Well, I don't know. We did say we'd take a break."
"But," he added quickly, "we never said how long the break would be."
"Hmm, true, but if we were going to do this again, break or not, considering what you've just told me, which is, I believe, and please correct me if I'm wrong, but did you not just say you can't control yourself? That though you've not gotten yourself off, you have touched yourself and did not tell me about it?"
His head dropped. "Yes, I mean, I didn't think of it that way."
"So," she whispered softly, "if were to continue, then we would have to deal with that. There would be more rules for you."
He looked up at her, earnest and eager. "Anything."
She smiled and blushed and wagged her finger at him. "Careful. Don't start making promises you can't keep."
"Ella," he said, "whatever it is, I'll do it. You know that, don't you? This has been the most amazing ride of my life and you are the most amazing woman. You don't have to be so gentle with me. I can take it. I swear. If you want to be bossy and bitchy, you don't know what that does to me. It drives me crazy. It makes me insane with wanting you even more. I don't pretend to understand it. Maybe you're right. Maybe doing this really has made me focus all my pleasure on you."
"Well," she corrected, "not all your pleasure obviously."
He smiled, blushed, nodded. "Right. I'm sorry. I've been trying so hard. All I'm saying is whatever it is you want to do, I want to do it, too."
"Well," she grinned, "I do have an idea."
- COMMENTS
willowindover 5 years agoI guess it's the reason I am reading this erotic fiction. I think this is one of the best subject matter stories I have read on here. It is also very well written. I know that some people are having difficulty believing in the characters but we are all different and if you don't like it now, why carry on reading? Just so you can make yourself upset and feel the need to write in again as anonymous.
Anonymousover 5 years agoBut the good news is that they weren't married (why did you post this in loving wives???) and it costs him nothing to dump the bitch into the gutter. Stupid story.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI've been reading this for a good few hours now (haven't finished yet) and while I felt bizarrely torn as to my thoughts on it at first, now I just don't like it at all. I think my problem with it, as far as not being turned on is that it shows the thoughts and internal conflicts of both the guy and the girl. In femdom stories I just prefer only seeing his thoughts and maybe a select few of hers, but that's still a rather flexible rule. But then there's all of the twisted, fucked up intricacies of how their "game" and relationship progresses. It seems socially and psychologically unhealthy for people to treat each other like they do.
And then it gets even more uncomfortable (for me at least) because there's also a third person involved, manipulating the dom. This person who weaseled themselves between two people who they don't care about at all for their own messed up reasons.
But like I said if I was only privy to Jim's thoughts and perspective I think I would really love it. I could do without the burden of knowing all of the creepy urges Ella feels, and how she herself and her friend justify it to themselves. But I'm sure that a change like that would ruin the story for someone else, so...
I feel incredibly uncomfortable after reading it. But it's quite well written, so if you don't feel disturbed by the attitudes of the narrative and characters you might well like it.
Anonymousover 9 years agoWhy can't someone for once write something that is original. We all know where this story is going and as usual the male character is a brainless moron who is being led by the balls, while the female character will ultimately have him in knots twisted around her little finger.
For gods sake any male (wont even begin to call him a man) who is this dumb would probably be dead by know because he forgot to breath.
Anonymousover 10 years agoThis is a great series, but only so long as the reader can suspend disbelief - which is the key to all great fantasy fiction. Here,the degree of docile brainwashing exhibited is too out of proportion to the fairly gentle treatment Jim has received to date.
In "real" life, the conditioning treatment has to happen before the effect - now the series will have to catch up on that front. My own experience was that I had to be brought to the point of desparation continually over a much longer period before my brain started to turn to mush. I would like to read that process in subjective detail rather than just skip to plot developments. It's still a great series though!
