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All Comments on 'I Keep Seeing Floating Vaginas'

by tobefree1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
ESL

It's obvious that English is not your first language. Good luck with your ESL studies

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hard to read!

You have a good base for your story, however it is very difficult to read. I would get someone to edit and help you in the sentence structure and surplege. Overall it could be a really good story!

hindsight2020hindsight2020over 7 years ago
Interesting idea.

Poorly executed. So a "keep writing" 3*

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