by ttocs68
Women aren't switches and don't go from uninterested to f*cking you senseless. The writing is bad. There's no exploration in the various senses we have and their relationship. Slow it down and add more description. I thought this was a troll piece until you posted a second chapter.
Instead of magical cock, you give us magical dom sub radar. Having read several of your pieces now, I detect the odor of misogyny wafting through your work.
If you have a comment voicing an opinion on who you think I am try using your member name otherwise please keep your anonymous thoughts to yourself. Don't pretend you know me by what you read.