All Comments on 'I Know Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Sound Like a Pavlovian Dog

Women aren't switches and don't go from uninterested to f*cking you senseless. The writing is bad. There's no exploration in the various senses we have and their relationship. Slow it down and add more description. I thought this was a troll piece until you posted a second chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
No, you don't know.

Instead of magical cock, you give us magical dom sub radar. Having read several of your pieces now, I detect the odor of misogyny wafting through your work.

ttocs68ttocs68about 8 years agoAuthor
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