All Comments on 'I Know What I Am Doing, Honey Ch. 03'

You allow for emotion in the wife far greater than any story you've so far. She is repentant and is trying to be a good wife now. Very different concept and pretty original storyline. I'm glad there was some tension in her time with Master. The justice of her being a slave for George is satisfying to me. I am glad that George did not stay home and pine away for her celibate. Thanks for writing.

It is good to have an ending, but this seemed too simple for such a complicated situation. The emotional and behavioral fallout needs greater development. Neither of them is the same person. Their marriage is not what it was. THAT is the real story to me.

This story is well written, and, up to a good read. I am kind of sad that it just simply ended. When you started this, you were giving both sides equal time (hers and her husbands). Now this last chapter was, well here you are and there you go. See ya.

Sorry, once I come across the word "Master" I stop reading.

If you use an apostrophe to make a word plural, you need an editor, or a new hobby.

I liked the ending. It seemed very real. I thought that she would end up wanting to live her life in servitude and resent her old life with her loving husband. That is the way most of these stories end. But this ending kept true to what a real person would feel in this situation. A man who subjects a woman to slavery for an entire year and expects her to follow his every demand is probably not going to turn around and be loving to her. He is going to expect this relationship to stay one sided. While the initial kink of the situation may be fun for the woman, she is not going to turn around and want to live the rest of her life like this. Unless something is seriously wrong with her, she is probably going to crave a relationship with more give and take. There are too many authors who make the characters fall unrealistic by making them live happily ever after in their fantasy world. In Literotica, women leave their loving husbands in pursuit of a life of gangbangs, orgies, and master/slave relationships. They leave their real life behind and try to live the fantasy. I have never seen this scenario happen in real life. I'm glad to see that an author who writes sub stories understands that

great story but would like to hear georges side of it in the end. must be hard to get back together after all that went on with her.

You made the ending feel very real. After going through a year like that there is no way the relationship could not suffer as a result. You did well conveying the consequences of what happened and how the return to normal is anything but. I also want to second a lot of Javmor79's comments about how many stories have the wife resenting her old like upon her playing out her fantasy. I hope we get to hear George's side soon

Wasnt worth the time to write this wated to long to post

Meh

This lacked passion and purpose. Writing about her feelings and "demons" does not mean that the story will have an emotional drive. It seems like you knew where you were going with the opening postings but didn't know where it needed to go from there. It really needed more than a one page epilogue. She was and still is a very selfish person and really got exactly what she deserved.

I make no bones about not liking her, the other characters or the concept but I can still appreciate good writing to persuade me the plot is plausible or sound. This chapter did not do any of that, in fact quite the opposite. Shallow story and inconsistent characters with the original chapters. Perhaps you are planning another chapter to tell George's side of it. If so I hope you will put more thought into it than you did this one.

I struggled with what to mark this and settled on a 4. You write very well and on your writing alone you deserved a 5 but two things took away from it.

One is it took so long to wait for the final chapter and we have nothing from George on the reconnection at all.

Second is while there is some real emotion telling us how she was feeling in the last months of her "captivity" it felt rushed.

I don't know if you are planning to put up a final chapter on things from George's side but I just can't imagine how you can put any reality into how he would feel coming up to their re-connection and the months after.

All that said, you write very well and your story is imaginative so please stay with us and write much more.

Lack of direction, implausible plot line and characters - could have summed up this story as a 1 page cuck-whore piece of shit story. Author - why did you waste your/our time on this garbage? Debra

Who writes this shit.

Of course she didn't know what she was doing!!!! She was damaged all through this, and I doubt that she will ever recover!! But the most stupid character was the so called Master!!! He could have all the money in the world, but was stupid, and would be all his life a lonely and bitter man. He will be always a "Poor rich man", no matter how many slaves he had in his life...This story began written by the husband, but from then on, we never read how he felt, how he lived all those days alone!!!

Hope we get to see George's side soon.

hope this get better

This whole story deals with master/slave and the husband was only a mere afterthought. Please tell me why this should be posted here instead of the fetish section. I mean master/slave is about as fetish as it gets....right!?!?

This is a fetish or BDSM story pure and simple. Oh, and NO MAN, that's correct I said NO MAN would be there when she got back. After a fucking year? A year? He would have taken the money and beat feet after the first 6 months.

Hope there is more to this ending ,it can't be just he took her back and that's it. Some returned with no hubby there to welcome them home which is what I would expect. Maybe he takes her as his slave for the year while he is taking all the money and hiding it . Than when the year ends he dumps the pig with nothing and tells her she never should of told him she was doing it no matter what. Does she tell all like how she was fucked by him , a18 year old and some clients, like a prostitute. This can't be a happily ever after story, there needs to be turmoil after what she did and made him go through. She basically was a dog for a year and he needs to have that go through his head and watch her wear all she got over the year to rub his nose in it as she wears stuff he would never be able to give her. Ever if they stay together she needs to suffer a little him leaving maybe fucking others for a while to give her some what he felt. To much happened for the welcome home let's have kids and live happily ever after. Make another chapter please

No one wants to read this drivel in LW. And I mean NO ONE. Another awful story that comes as no surprise from this poor author.

But we readers are left with a quite rushed ending only from the wife's POV.

What a normal LW reader wants to read about is the emotions of the betrayed or cuckolded husband - yes, this husband was the victim of a selfish bitch who did exactly THIS to her supposedly beloved in order to get some kink for herself.

As other commenters pointed out: no real husband would endure this, and this couple surely cannot make it. They converted a room to a nursery - ernestly? This woman becoming a mother? Never!

Perhaps we will read an additional chapter from the husband's POV including the final breakdown that would happen in real life.

based on the comments you received from "The Wendy Dilemma".

All that time you spent in the the main story on his thoughts and all the time in this on what she was doing that year, and you spent a whole two paragraphs sweeping everything under the carpet. You resolved it by ignoring it.

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She's under therapy! Big fucking deal.

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There has to be more to him accepting her back so readily, though for the life of me, based on what his thoughts are in the other story, you're going to have to really twist things around, really jump through hoops, to make those thoughts and his actions -- inactions, really -- match up.

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You wrote "they were are things we still do not know" yet in the very next paragraph you negated that uncertainty with the parts about the nursery and the trip. That indicate they know these things. If they don’t, heaven help any child they create.

Not a credible story even for fantasy. The bitch is crazy and now is emotionally broken. The hapless husband is such a pussy I don't think he has balls. Story is just to bad to believe.

because the way you ended the husband's tale I didn't know. I'm glad to know it wasn't all fun and games for her. She probably learned a lot about herself and her husband. But thinking of the "sweetness" anklet, I would think she would never wear it once she got back. And if she did, hubby would make her go and pawn it for the money.

You desperately need either to edit your own or get someone you trust to edit your stories. All 6 were filled with word errors. I liked the plot and the stories, but that is why I only gave you a 4 on each one.

I am pleased that you did decide to write a concluding chapter even though I find the outcome unsatisfying. I can not see any credible way this story ends in an upbeat fashion. The husband will be forever haunted by the fact his wife became a whore over his objections turning him into a cuckold and a pimp .It is equally likely that the wife will be unable to return to a stable marital relationship. Despite a belated effort to show some dissatisfaction with her master she has fully enjoyed being a high priced sexual escort. How long will it before the attraction of that life overcomes the boring restraints of a conventional marriage?

What a shit story , selling yourself into prostitution for a year . Being used for multiple sex. Then dumped back into the real world. This was really total garbage .

Unreadable.

You certainly can write your stories to suit yourself. Yet, I suggest you also consider what you reader wants to know from your concept. Here, she is gone for one year, but no discussion of what hubby was doing, what he did with his 3MM, what he plan to do with the other 3MM, or what she does with her money. Also, how does she compare her current life with her old one, and, although they now have a nursery, how do they discuss this issue--not to mention whether they just agree not to discuss her year away at all. With so many chapters written, your readers have made an investment of time. You should respond to this with a more complete ending.

Where can you run? I didn't look back, did George get a message with four hanging dicks behind sweetness back. I didn't consider how many men she would have to fuck. Was there a limit. Well if you sold your wife you should be there upon her return, to look in her eyes and cry yours out. How much did they (she) earn?

Quite a tale one year can you imagine.

I just realized, the husbands who didn't come to pick up there wives, probably didn't plan to. (*~*)

Well done from the wife's perspective. Now let's hear from George!

I really liked chapter 1. Chapter two was disturbing, as she so easily left her George- life behind, seemingly without a care. She lived a full year, making love to her master, forgetting George's face since she has no picture, then just picks up where she left off happy as a clam, rich from her fee, and no side effect but seeing a company provided counselor? It feels like this was just a quick "tie it up" tale, and not worthy of the excellent setting in the first two chapters. I wish it had ended as strong.

no, if they could my eyes would be vomiting reading shit story

I would hold runny dog shit in more regard than georgey

her hell master sould have saved the money thrown her to the sharks, oh wait they have standards also

Really, your wife sells herself to be a whore for a year and its OK honey well have a normal life when I get back. Really, sorry cant see how any guy would put up with it, As soon as she said too bad, I would say fine sell her then go, She can pick up the divorce papers when she gets back, as the house will be sold along with everything else. Love to see that story

No moral lessons, but no unalloyed bliss at the end . Something undeniably lost in return for fiscal gain. Well done ! Author made a savvy choice, not returning to George's POV. Such a milquetoast, although that passive quality is one the reasons , why the couple 'might' make it after all. Full marks for complex emotions. *****

This chapter has emotions and relationship issues, great! And the emotions and issues could be realistic. After reading this chapter, I want to know more, to read more.

Token complaint: I now want you to expand on most of what is in this chapter. I am interested again and could easily get into more detail on everything here. What does the psychiatrist think? Does George attend with you, is he having issues also? Did she keep any of those gifts or toss them in the garbage when she got back to her George?

These are good complaints unless you never address them.

Only if you're not done. The master deliberately pissed her off toward the end to ensure she dropped any fondness for her, clever enough policy. Nothing substantive was written about hubby? How'd he look, was house a dusty mess, what did he do for a year, why is he touching her without full disclosure of her activities? He doesn't need a disease from whem master shared her or himself for that matter. This would be a twisted mess of emitions and possible outcomes to deal with. If he sat home and brooded his imagination would likely have left him an emotional suspiscious cripple. I dont recall her telling him to have a few one nighters to take the edge off, how thoughtful of her to forget that in her plan. FINISH the damn story or invite FTDS to do it. Invitational perhaps?

"I knew that I had lost part of myself during my year long sojourn. I had also taken something from George. "

Part of herself? She lost all of herself and if George is accepting of this absolutely stupid premise she deserves the wimp.

Stupid story. Stupid Characters. Juvenile writing.

Shame on me for reading it after I said I was done with it.

why do u post in loving wives and put up with the assholes and there ridiculous kick em to the curb attitudes; f'in sick women haters.

Good story good sir but i do agree it needs more I hope you will find the time and desire to continue this one a bit. For instance, why is she now a slave in her marriage? That is indeed a nasty result unless of course they both need it but id like to know lol do they feel like telling us about it ?

Thanks for writing and thanks fro listening.

Jim

like many other commentators, I feel it is not finished. How is George handling it? Is there more detail on how he got his ro9cks off in those final months? How was their sex life on return? Is it getting better nor worse as the months go by/ More details would be appreciated on the psychiatrist. Is it just her or her & George? All the same, great stuff in all over the whole series with a clever sexy concept. 5*. Ken

.....or unfilled portions of this fairly interesting, but apparently somewhat now abbreviated story.

So what did George get up to while she was away? What price are they both paying in this now profoundly changed marriage? She acts a little like someone that has been taken, brutalized, then escapes or is released and spends years dealing with the trauma. That you suggest that this is her response to her year in paid captivity, doesn't seem to be congruous with her personality going in. She did not strike me as naive, rather strong-willed and determined.

She was not taken captive, she went in, supposedly, with both eyes open, even if against her husband's wishes.

We did not read much about his grieving or how he dealt with her loss. For as surely as if she died, the woman that returned was not the same one that left a year earlier.

The "hall pass" was not much in evidence, either.

I believe, most men, faced with a year of their wife's contracted perfidy (tell me again how she is not a prostitute, albeit highly paid?), would have eventually lost it and blurted out the deal to the families, then gone off to find some self respect and a new love.

The remainder would likely be split into two groups.....

The first group would stick around long enough to get the full balance of the money, spending most of the year in the company of someone they could plan a happy future with, then would have dissapated into thin air, like so much mist on a warm morning....

The second group would have likely either been gone al,out immediately, or stayed on, then divorced as soon as it was apparent the marriage was no longer what either of them started out to build together and that they were no longer the people they had been. These kinds of things change you....and those close to you.

Perhaps, a very, very....let me say again VERY small minority might have stayed on and worked to rebuild their marriage.

I cannot imagine what characterisitcs of common human nature you would expect us to ignore here, but too many of them were abused in the writing and it all sort of...fell apart about mid-story.... Almost like you lost interest and stopped investing yourself in it.... Or perhaps painted yourself into a corner and decided to end it quickly, rather than labor through it.

It's a big old world out there. I'm not going to say this scenario does not nor could not ever happen. What I am saying is that it would most assuredly spell the end of an extremely high percentage of any involved marriages.

Hell. Indecent Proposals have happened... And virtually all of those broke the couple up over just one night.

An interesting, if not very new idea....played out in a less than stellar presentation.

An original story of a unique situation for a married couple.

I must agree with previous comments that the story really does need more depth regarding the husband. How did he pass his time, did have relationships with other women, how does his wife reconnect with him, does she tell him details of her slavery with master, how many men she has fucked, how often, the places she has visited, her holidays, her new designer clothes, being her husband's slave for a year just what does thst entail, the money how do they use it / spend it, does the wife ever run into any she knew while with her master, just so many unanswered question's.

This certainty does warranty a sequel !

So please Wifetheif lets have a sequel ?

@rothltdoad 

" why is she now a slave in her marriage? That is indeed a nasty result unless of course they both need it but id like to know lol do they feel like telling us about it ?"

If you had read the whole story, which started with "How Much Do You Think I Would Bring",  it was part of what she said she would do to make it up to hubby.  And that she'd come back with all kinds of new tricks to enhance their sex life (so author did she? Let's hear about how their sex life improved or --- didn't), as if that would make up for her betrayal of her vows. A very weak story and ending. Both of them would be emotionally scarred. Or George is just a wimp cuck at heart. No balls, pussy whipped by his slut wife. So afraid of losing the whore. If it was me, she'd return to the house to find another woman in my bed and her a slave to us both. If she didn't like it too bad. She was the one that insisted she whore herself out. And as our slave she'd get as much mental punishment as I could dish out. 

"George was still number one in my heart, but now, sometimes when I allowed myself to day dream, my Master occupied center stage. "

How can women say that? I love you but... they have no understanding of the meaning of love. Here is a clue. For most couples sexual exclusivity is part of love. It is the most intimate expression of something they only share with each other. 

" I knew that I had lost part of myself during my year long sojourn. I had also taken something from George. What we had lost, and whether we can ever put our lives back the way they were are things we still do not know, even all these months later."

Things will never be the same. George will always wonder if she will do it again or if she'll cheat on him. Trust her? Not likely? So what does George do? Take her back like nothing happened? Hardly believable. And Sweetness, can she ever really respect George? What part of her self did she lose? She now knows she's just a very expensive whore? What they lost they can never regain. 

"No, I would not be put through the rigors that my wife was surly going through but not having her around was very hard on me. Oh sure I could have taken the money and vanished like a fart in the wind to start a new life somewhere else, but I love my wife."

Love should be mutual.  

What a crock. Wifey is having the time if her life fucking like the slut she is. Too bad hubby doesn't use the time to line up a whole bunch of honeys. He should be fucking wife's best friends and emailing her pictures of that. 

I have followed this series and agree that more needs to be done with George. However, the last few paragraphs redeem the wife character. It shows a self awareness that previous entries did not. That something was changed and lost in the relationship. More along that vein.

You are in serious need of an editor. There were way too many spelling and punctuation errors. Even you member name is misspelled, if you were going for "Wifethief"

This cite provides editors for free. I have had good results with mine.

Also, on line you need to split the paragraphs to no more than three sentences. It simply makes the story easier to read.

Other than very numerous errors, writing was not bad, but the sex could have been made more erotic, you didn't make full use of what might have been a rather hot scenario.

I get a kick out of the comments. Must be a lot of horney English teachers that read this stuff. Probably my 8th Grade teacher: Mrs. Cohen. Great ta-tas on her. I spent the year fantasizing about her and got a D in English and so, any bad grammar or miss-spellings are lost on me.

I enjoyed it,

Please, author, write a sequel. We want to know how George lived for the year (alone or with a girlfriend, for example), and what he did with the money. Also, can the wife avoid flashbacks and other memories that disturb her relationship with George? Also, doe she ever meet any of the other women who spend the year away? Also, how does she explain to friends and family where she has been and what she has been doing for one year?

The other half of the story is allready writen. This is just another dickless cum sucking fagot story . No man would do this no loving wife would ho herself out

Someting vaguely troubling about the ending. I'd like to see a little more. She says they have both lost something, but does she really comprehend what she has done? The final chapter I imagine is not that much fun. George really wanted it to be alright, but the experience is corrosive, and he can't take it. Every new outfit he asks simply, "That looks great. Where'd you get it?" She tells him. He goes silent. Again. Eventually, she begins to lie about the outfits and jewelery. "Oh, I got it last week." In Italy, everytime she recommends a place, he knows she's been there with "him". The trip is slowly ruined. Her occasional wistful silences compete with his occasional mournful ones. It gets worse. Eventually, he moves out. They get together, but know it is dying. One day, she finds out he's killed himself/left the country/taken up with another woman. She takes a batch of sleeping pills, after sending a damning email to a magazine/website describing what she did.

During his year as her master, he should have her get him a mistress/slave that he will have sex with as many times as she did with her other master. And she should be made to get as many other women for her husband as she had various men. And he would even the score. That would make things right.

This one was OK, she had it better than I would have expected.(That is easy for me to say, I was not the one getting screwed and having to be "on" all the time. If you do write a sequel, author, please let things turn out OK (I have become a romantic, somewhat, in my old age). I got your email and appreciated it. Lamar

Not worth reading. Total waste of time.

George said. "Thanks for the money cunt but now you are history".

. . . interesting at first, but it turned out to be a major disappointment. Quite boring and emotionless, unfortunately, even though it had promise. Oh, well. 2 or 3*.

Skank whore. Nothing more to add.

Depressing

Take a long walk off a short pier!

I liked the husband's side of things, even if it was without sex. So far I've sort of skimmed the wife's part. In spite of the sex in it, it's not a sex story, it's just a dry account of what happened. But I have an imagination, and this story, both sides of the picture, have made it work overtime.

Good job.

Any story with description of a master or bull is total crap. No human would tolerate this treatment. No husband would let it happen. If someone told me he was my wife's new bull, I would give her a little gift and tell her it was from her new steer. Just unbelievable garbage.

The spend some of it on having her killed.

not sure why george would take the slut back i would have left her there and anybody could keep her not me

Been reading erotic stories here for several years. This one is in my top 3. Why? I like the no screwed up grammar . I love the well written story. I especially like the two person point of view, And finally it is flat out erotic.

After reading the first chapters I'm glad you added these three as it gave a very different view of what she went through. Really completed the theme. One again, good writing and I certainly enjoyed reading it.

Enough!!!! This rather pathetic clone of "The Story of O" has dear old George playing the part of pimp to his slut wife. All of that humiliation and degradation for the sake of a few bucks. What about STDs?! OK she might have been unable to get pregnant, but going bareback for a year has associated venereal disease risks. George should have dumped the bitch when she left.

I liked reading both sides of the story but the ending on both left too much unanswered for me but that is how story's are. I am glad that they stayed together since the husband agreed to it but she shouldn't have threatened divorce as that is what she would have gotten. Not the way to win is a way to loose in a not good way.

Read both POVs. Won't say it as pathetic as some comments suggest, since:

1. Despite obvious wife's manipulations and blackmailing, both DISCUSSED this option

2. George got some free pass, after all, and used it.

3. And why he still loves her? Well, some say love is blind....and deaf...and dumb......

But ending is obviously rushed, at least in my opinion. It should have been another part, concerning Italy trip and how it was nearly ruined thanks to internal struggles of both. Happy ending? Why not, but only after some penance, mainly from wife's side.

Since most gives 1 or 2 stars, I'll be generous - 3/5

Ridiculous, Stupid, Cheap, Crass, attempt at a story. It has no redeeming value whatsoever if you as the reader are NORMAL

Really dumb. Why would she sell herself into slavery - period? It would take billions to make that worthwhile. And why would her husband wait for her or take her back? God knows how many diseases she has been exposed to. And after a year, you wouldn't even know that person. Really a poor idea, poorly written, too long and just all around dreck. A complete waste.

IF she had sex several THOUSAND times in one year, she would probably need vaginal and/or anal reconstruction surgery on return. And the husband WELCOMED her back? Talking of an implausible story. Perhaps even stupid? Right up there in the Stormbringer author territory. Just surprised the "master" wasn't possessed of a one foot penis.

Stupid wife, stupid husband. Stupid is as stupid does. …

I only skimmed through this three part steaming pile of crap, And the writer's intent only reinforces what scientists have been saying for the last dozen years that worldwide testosterone levels are dropping. Only a low t wimpy ball lbut beta boy would write a three part piece of shit like this. No real man living in the real world, who has even a modicum of love and respect for himself would accept this very expensive whore back. Divorce after receiving payment would have been the action of the day, And making all the information available to all of her family, friends and professional working contacts to totally humiliate and destroy this dumb ass bitch.

What a delusional cunt, would’ve been a better ending if George found someone else and ditched the bitch.

Not to be, a cunt and her Cuck.

I scored this 2/5 as well, not anymore it’s now 1/5 and deserves less.