by AzanianHeat
PLEASE POST THE NEXT PART ASAP. I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. WONDERFUL STORY
How could you end it like that!! thats so cruel! hope the next chapter is posted soon... i cant wait for more, great job. Im really loving this story!
Fantastic chapter! Ek is bly omte se ek kon die Afrikaans verstaan even though my Afrikaans is a bit rusty lol. . This chapter was sooo worth the wait. . . Very excited for the next one but take your time omdat dit moet goed wees! 5 stars lol
You sure know how to pick your moments! The tension is amazing-somehow i don't think i will be the only one waiting for the next installment!
I love your writing and your turn of phrase- you really make me _see_ what's happening.
Love it!
OK 1st Absolutely LOVE your story, I've been dying for more since the first part. The characters hae such a fabulous chemistry. But how you could leave us with a cliffhanger and then make us wait, then give us more gold and then leave us with another hanger.
COME ON, DON'T MAKE US WAIT TOO LONG ITS TORTURE!!!!
Awesome story. I can't wait to see Aiden deal with his family and his ex-fiancee. Ethan deserves someone who loves him unconditionnally.
Please don't make us wait so long for the next installment. Great story; if I had one complaint, it's that I need to see more of Aiden thought process when it comes to how he feels about Ethan. We got a glimpse at lunch. We're in Ethan's mind quite a bit, but I'd love more of Aiden's. To be 30 and engaged and just coming to grips with your true sexuality is a lot to handle.
Thank You!! Thank you so much for continuing this story! Your writing is excellent and the thought, time and care you put into it makes for a wonderful story. PLEASE don't make us wait another month for Chapter 3!!!
Oh please please please I need to know what happens next!!!! I LOVE ur story, don't make us wait another month for chapter 3 please!!!
Torture is life. Another month is a small price to pay for this. Just make sure the next chapter is every bit as good, and no matter what torments you inflict upon your characters, make sure they are agonizing enough that my stomach twists just like it did reading this one. Because *that* is the mark of a truly great author, Lover... Excellent job with this. I'm loving it.
It's simply torture having to wait for the next chapter....Aiden kick Carolynn out on her fake arse now!
Absolutely FABULOUS!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.... I don't think I can wait an entire month...... please hurry.
I really love this type of story...A lot of this I can really identify with. Fortunately, I never fell this bad for a straight guy, though, so I didn't have THAT to worry about. heh.
But yea...I really am looking forward to the next chapter. I am becoming a real gay romance junkie...*chuckles* Great read. :)
P.S. I would leave an identity, but I've never made an account here. Been reading from this site for years, though. I am the king of procrastination. :3
Repeating the same sentiment...love love love it...I check back daily to see if the next chapter is published! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Next chapter, please. I keep checking back here and nothing new! Can't wait to see what Aiden does.
Aren't you going to write more? It is much too wonderful to leave unfinished.
hurrryyy! i can't take the waiting much longer! you've got me checking your page daily!
well, you know how to keep the readers on the edge with this cliffhanger. really looking forward to the next chapter
More please! To do anything else wud just be cruel! :) this is great!!!
I love the character development. I can't wait to see what happens with Ethan & aiden. Love Mike & the family. Would like to punch Carollyn half way into next week!
I had a feeling Sam felt that way, but you're not gonna go deeper with that? Lol.
I don't know how this will end, but I hope I like it :)
Great story so far :D
I not only love your story, but I love both Karin and Carolynn! Bitches brew...
You are building up a terrific story, the tension from one episode to the next is amazing and skillfully done.
It was great to read some Afrikaans. I speak Dutch, and although the two languages have been moving apart for 300 years, if I work hard, I can understand it without reading the English. The biggest changes are in the short everyday words. The longer polysyllabic words like 'uitkiezerigheit' are easy to understand!
NOOOO.... Ethan hates SOS?? I love that song!!! Noooooooo.....
when i started reading your story- i saw that there were 4 separate chapters- so when i read the 1st chapter- it was 4 pages- and i thought that was the whole story- i didn't realize the story is in 4 parts with multiple pages per part. i thought the first chapter with 4 pages was the 4 chapters. - so it looks like there will be time to finish the story
i dont care what any one says , this is still the top story on this site. ive read this once before, this is my 2nd read and i am still gripped... kill that woman.? however she doesnt but she gets it in the arse later.? boot that is.... loving this story.....
Great chapter. Looking forward to Carolynn getting her comeuppance. And Aiden & Ethan finally getting it on. Love your writing.