All Comments on 'I Like Your Eyes Wide Ch. 02'

I loved it!

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Love it. Need. Next. Chapter.

Also, she's walking on one side of the street, the houses would go 6, 8, 10.

Keep up the awesomeness!

Aare you already a published author? I stand in awe or your writing ability, I really do. Not just the content of the story - which is hot, sexy and beautifully described - but also of the way you write. Your prose is clear and grammatically correct. My one complaint remains that this is not long enough! Really look forward to the next chapter - which I hope will be posted very soon. Thank you for this.

Jules

I really appreciate the generous feedback - and the note about the house numbers! My boyfriend pointed that out to me too... Maybe our main character is so turned on that she can't count properly ;)

I'm not a published author but it's ALWAYS been a dream of mine. Thanks for the kind feedback!

Hello! Your story is absolutely amazing! I have read many published and unpublished erotic stories and yours is one of the best! I'm so hooked. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

This is seriously one of the best I've read on this site. I would totally love to read a novel by you.

Excellent.

This story is the essence of what a good Dom/sub story should be. Sexy as all hell, with the trust and devotion shining through. Bravo.

I loved your story and eagerly await your next chapters.

WOW! It ended beyond my expectations, can't wait to read more!

This is a wonderful story and I anticipate reading more. Your style is refreshing and totally enjoyable. I await you next installment.

I'm waiting.

"Please sir, please let me come!"

More Please

Please may we have more?