All Comments on 'I Love College Girls'

by EdwardSteele

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ttom76ttom76almost 12 years ago
Abrupt End

First, you have her from two countries.

Second, your end was poor. Why would she cheat on her boy friend? You led up to the interesting part, then drop it.

Disappointing

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
What he said ^^ or VV

I was liking your story until you switched up the countries. Then the end is like whoa?

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