All Comments on 'I Love My Nerd Pt. 01'

...I almost titled this comment "Picture of my Penis", but decided against it. :D

Eagerly waiting for part 2

Pretty good effort for a first submission. I like the story, but you need to check your work: it is too easy to pull a reader from your story with simple mis-spellings and grammatical errors. You had a couple that started me out of the story. But overall, a very good effort. 4****

Your writing needs a lot of work, too many errors distract from the story.

Great way to lure us in an want more. Plus I love banter

Can't wait for next part.

You really are a bitch ending it like that! He sounds awesome! Nerds are the best! I love it and can't wait for me just not unseen cliffhangers next time...

A cute and clever story - very good for a first submission. Ignore the haters and keep writing! (also - there is a funny Portlandia clip on Youtube about "real nerd" versus "hipster wannabe nerd.") Your character has the confidence of a hipster nerd which is really not a nerd at all. But that doesn't mean I don't love it - I do.

Your creativity is obviously setting the story up for an intimate evening of kinkiness. I can't wait!

LOVED IT.

Pretty cool.

...please!

This is good story..... so far. Great potential. You want to read more but there is no more!😳