All Comments on 'I Love to Gamble'

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don87654don87654about 20 years ago
Needs more work

You say that this will be a continuation???

Yes, that would be a great idea. But did I miss something? Did she just have a baby....the reason for the milk to flow from her breasts. I don't recall reading anything about her having a baby, recently, or otherwise.

You could continue this story quite easily, by this guy cuming back and continuing to fuck her, and making a baby with her. Her husband would not have to know that it is not his baby (or babies if they continue to fuck over a certain time frame. As her husband goes out with the boys, she stays home and is continuously fucked and bred with this guy. All sorts of possibilities exist with this story.

Don

sherlock40sherlock40about 20 years ago
Wrong category

This should be over in the cheating wives category. The sex scene was great, but in the end it's just another cheating wife story. Very original. I am sure she will continue to betray her husband everytime she can now and will have no problem with it.

Here's to hoping he finds out and dumping her ass. (Like that will ever happen)

Whatever the comments are, including mine, just keep on writing.

noone269noone269about 20 years ago
Decent story, but needs work

Also about the milk coming out of her breast, did she just have a baby? I didn't see any mention of that in the story. This should also be in the Loving Wives category, it doesn't fit here.

dsidedsideabout 20 years ago
So,

Sam's a cheating slut. Why isn't this story in Loving Wives

that's were all cheating slut stories are. If you put it in that catagory you can have her husband catch her and he can be a forgiving wimp like all the other husbands over there.

Did you know that women don't usually give milk unless they are breast feeding, so where's the baby?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
difficult to read

difficult to read-not enjoyable

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
All credit to the author

Anybody tat can devote the time to write these stories for the pleasure of others; no matter how technically experienced, deserves praise

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