by redwitch
as usual, you have done a wonderful job...perhaps you would reconsider leaving this story unfinished?
Thank you anyway for another chapter!
jC xxO
I love this story and have been patiently waiting for updates. I was so excited to see both new chapters, and now that I am totally pissed at Jake and despise Ludvine in the worst way, I desperately need to know what happens!!! Love your stories & will wait for what ever time you can squeeze into your busy schedule! Good Luck with your movie.
You write a kick ass story leave your readers hanging and tease them with little snipets. You are a ----- but I love the stories. Hope you stop playing games and post the rest of the story.
You write a kick ass story leave your readers hanging and tease them with little snipets. You are a ----- but I love the stories. Hope you stop playing games and post the rest of the story.
Ok, PLease tell me your aleast gonna do a couple more chapters or a long one. If this story ends like this it will be complete bullshit!
the better authors on this site need to realize that they have some serious followers. many many ppl have waiting for this story to continue and this chapter proved to be worth the wait. the character JAKE is a perfect balance crazy/masculine/dominant/vulnerable and successful. as nutty as he is his character remains BELIVEABLE!!!!! ; which is what 99.9% of these stories lack. you captured how and intense, masculine, love-ridden character would do! perfect