by redwitch
This was a great chapter that bitch maid finally got what she desevered! Can't wait till next chapter! You always leave your readers wanting more.
i've been checking for an update every week since the last chapter, it was so worth the wait, Jake is hot!! Jez is smokin!
Awesome awesome!!! I was afraid that you where never coming back lol
I have been waiting for this one!!!
Finally, finally, finally! Sooooooooooooo very glad that stupid bitch Ludvine got what she deserved. Jez is one crazy female though lol. I hope it doesn't end well with Ludvine and her mind tricks. And Jake ... well ... we'll see next chapter what Jez does to him! lol Please hurry with the next update!
OMG thank you for another chapter wohhoooo
hmmm i woudner wats gna happn 2 jake!
Loved it! Loved that she beat that bitch down because Ludvine was really asking for it. Trying to poision ppl, is she crazy? Rhetoric question of course! Ah! next chapter. this is too awesome. i can just imagine that she's about beat jake now. they are both deliciously twisted. thank god though because they are fun.
I'm checking everyday, at least twice!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!
GIVE ME MORE!! lol i loved it!! 'Bout time that bitch got what she deserved. Now it Jakey's turn...
Go Jezebel, beat the hell out of that *B* Ludvine. Oh yeah, this was a great update. I loved it and about damn time she was able to get out and I was so happy to read that she beat the shit out of that heifer...oh yeah...thanks so much for a great read.
AS for Dude, his aunt should have slapped the mess out of him for locking Jezebel up.
His friend should be a shame of himself for not allowing his girlfriend to go to her friends rescue.
Thanks again
She needs to beat the hell outta Ludvine one more time and fuck Jack's ass up!!! UGHH!!!....anyhooo...WONDERFUL CHAPTER!! UPDATE SOON!!!
You've left us hanging too long. I must admit to taking pride in Ludi's suffering. The hand writting on the forehead was a nice touch. As for Jake, whe he comes to... I'm sure he will be getting a taste of his own medicine. I am enjoying this story.
UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE.
Yo it was about time that Lud got her ass served to her. I just loved the beat down Jezi gave her. But please pretty please finish this story. Continue the excellent work.
Oh really! You've got to finish this story, please, please, please.
Please finish this story...I've been waiting for months!!!!!!
Damn, I'm glad that bitch got what she had coming. Don't know what I'm more upset about, how long it took Ludvine to get paid what she's owed, or this damn cliffhanger! Hope you've got time to get the next chapter up soon.
I hated that bitch. I'm so happy that she got her ass kicked, also Jack's a little bitch him self, if hes soo worryed about the baby he, him self should be watching her not some maid he doesn't know! the babys most likly died by now...
I have to admit I was kind of falling out of erotic stories, they were always the same plot over and over again, but these series are incredibly fascinating! Its not just about sex, the characters are addictive, which is why I am begging you to please finish this story! Its too good to finish like this!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
-Oh and this is definitely a 10/10!!!!
listen here redwitch your a bitch,if you didnt plan on finishing the story,why did you start it i the first place,smh thats so cruel
I would love to know how this ends. I was really getting into the story. Hope you finish it soon.
i LOVE this chapter!!! I've been waitin for karma to whoop Ludvine's ass, lol! Pretty please finish the story....cliffhangers are pure TORTURE!!!!
Pleaseee pleaseee update soon!!! I really want to continue reading, I love this story so much. You've done such a great job so far! I really hope to read the ending for this story.
You are absolutely amazing!!! OMG I'm going to DIE if you don't update soon!! OMG I'm going crazy thinking about this story!!! OMG I love YOU for writing this!!!
OH MY G--!!!!!!!
*Hyperventilates and just goes crazy and starts rolling around on the floor*
-mpb22
Totally love this series.... read it twice... waiting for a conclusion!!! please update soon.... really would like to what happens....
I can't take it anymore...finish pleeeaseeee it's soooooo effing :D
I think I may actually cry if the ending of this story does not come soon...
Could you like,finish this please I'm dieing to know what happens next!!!
Kay thanks :)
Havnt u finished this story?????????????????? i really cant wait for the endin i hope its good please finish the story the anticipation is killin me
Please finish this story!!!! I can't wait to see what happens.......
hilarious, that Ludvine forgot the Biblical saying,"Do unto others as you would have others to do unto you"
I love Jezebels' desire to plot and think ahead whether on her feet or not.