I Make Kelly Mine Ch. 01

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She nodded up and down.

"Good. Do you think you can stand on your own?"

She nodded up and down again.

I took her gag off, and undid her cuffs.

"Put your hands behind your head."

She did as she was told. I stepped out of the bathtub.

"Turn around."

As she did this, I took a towel, moistened it with soap and water, and toweled myself down a bit. I wasn't quite ready for a shower. I then turned to her, gripped her hair, and put my palm up as if to slap her.

"You are to speak freely for a few moments. You are to say the first thing that comes into your mind. I reserve the right to punish you if I don't like it. Speak."

"I've never had an orgasm this intense before, Master. I...I don't think I like being urinated on."

"Tough. When I wish to piss on you, you will take it like a slave. Is that clear?"

"Yes, Master."

"Good. Let's clarify our arrangement further. You are my submissive little bitch to piss on. If I indicate in any way that I have a need to urinate, you are to offer yourself to be pissed on, and upon confirmation, assume the position in the tub or shower. Is that clear, Bitch?"

"Yes, Master."

"Repeat it back to me so that I know for sure."

Kelly gulped a little.

"I...I am your submissive little bitch to piss on. If you indicate in any way that you have a need to urinate, I will offer myself to be pissed on, and assume the position in the tub or shower."

"Do you have any problem with that?"

"No master."

"Good. I want you to thank me for everything I have done to you so far tonight, beginning with your inspection."

She took a few moments to gather her thoughts.

"Thank you master for, ordering me to strip and inspecting me. Thank you..."

I reached back and slapped her ass.

"I inspected you like a subservient fuck-doll. Is that understood?"

"Yes, master. Thank you master for, ordering me to strip and inspecting me like the subservient fuck-doll that I am."

"That's better. Continue."

"Thank you for showing me my position, and clarifying our contract, master. Thank you for handcuffing me like a submissive little bitch, master. Thank you for punishing me like a worthless piece of fuck-meat, Master. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to suck you off, and face-fucking me until you came in my mouth, master. Thank you for gagging me, and forbidding me to swallow your cum like the cunt that I am. Thank you for disciplining me by whipping my ass hard with your belt while I watched your sperm come down my chin. Thank you for pissing on me while I was on my knees like a worthless, submissive little slut of a slave who does not deserve the privilege. And, lastly, thank you for vibrating me to orgasm repeatedly while I was covered in your piss and sperm."

"Good. I am satisfied with that so far. I am not done with you yet. You are far too dirty for what I have in mind next. You are to clean yourself thoroughly. When you are done, put your heels and nylons back on, and assume your position in front of the table. We will then conduct a butt-fucking session."

Kelly's eyes widened at that.

"Do you understand?"

"Yes, master."

"You have 15 minutes to comply."

To be continued...

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BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakover 6 years ago
Reading because....

I am reading this because Soppingwetpanties posted a story from Kelly's POV. I figured it would make more sense to read the original first. However, you about lost me when he went in and drank the 2 glasses of water because I knew what was coming eventually. If in the next chapter, you have him piss in her mouth (or on her face again) or shit on her, I won't be reading anymore of your stories. I like BDSM stories but not when extreme cruelty and humiliation are involved. I also don't like women being called a cunt, whore or slut. To say they are acting like one, I don't have a problem with but to call them one is despicable. Just because a woman likes being dominated and used for sex doesn't make her a slut or a whore. If that were true, that would make every Dom a whore and a slut too. The cruelty and just plan meanness gives every Dom a bad name and the whole BDSM lifestyle a bad rap. You probably won't ever read this because of how old the story is but putting my POV out there anyway. No, I don't write stories. I am not here for that...I am here just to enjoy reading them. When I don't enjoy the story, I rate it accordingly and move on to a different story. I also keep a file on my computer of very offensive "writers" who I make a point of NEVER reading their stories again. I have a funny feeling, you may end up on that list but for the time being, I will give you the benefit of the doubt and read the next chapter. I only gave this one 3 stars. I hope to be able to give the next chapter more.

elisebeeelisebeealmost 10 years ago
Reads like an old misogynist

Especially when you layer in your bio.

docmagnusdocmagnusover 10 years agoAuthor
Re: Masterfuljim's comment

This is fiction written in the first person. Aspects of this are based on real encounters (which is pretty much true of all fiction). All of my past experiences have been consensual, and discussed beforehand. I have never had a bad experience, and never had less than 10 sessions with any partner. That being said: the section you refer to could possibly stand some editing to fix the point you brought up. I may end up doing this, and re-posting it.

FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago
MJ

On this opinion we can dance together in the moonlight--but alas for you, not skyclad.

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
So

To be clear

You took a vanilla woman who had shown an interest in playing, gave her a contract with a safe word, gagged her and then beat her with a belt 25 times...her first ever experience of punishment...thus nullifying her ability to safe word as no non verbal safety net given.....and all of it you claim to be true .

No wonder the lifestyle gets a bad name.

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