All Comments on 'I Make My Coworker Bitch Crawl'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Mistakes

Way to many mistakes to enjoy. Grammar was really bad and you couldn't even be consistent on what clothes she had on. Was it jeans or a dress ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I enjoyed

On the author's favour, the black top was the dress he referred to.

I loved it. The author is just starting but has great potential.

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