by magmaman
For us older folks, nice moments, different insights and shocking fantasy moments.
you just lost a reader when you wrote that debs is now SHAVED.... a woman that is shaved doesn't look natural... reminds me of back when I had to chance my LITTLE sister's diaper...LOL (otherwise, loved your stories)
My mistake, I shouldn't have read anymore of the story after your warning. At least you both got off and you didn't write a cuck story. Swinging and sharing just isn't my thing.
I like most of your stuff, but this isn't you. Or maybe it just isn't me. In any case, nah!
...only a big deal to the young and inexperienced. I wonder what anon would think about ACTUAL "swinging". And the anon with the distaste about shaved genitalia not only does he,she not realize what that sort of hang-up implies("anyone?...-Sandusky??"),- but why would they not mention offense at the man(you) being shaved????
MGM's spare but sure touch shepherded this read into the quality zone. He didn't dawdle & yet took note of the couple's brush with the proverbial alternative lifestyle. In retrospect, it was a bit tawdry but hey ....that's Vegas.
It is a bit stretched for most people but if it works it works - no major lines were crossed - no secrets, no lies, no apparent hidden agenda for any one involved.
That works for me -
More importantly - to me anyway - the story is well written and fun to read - my ability to live out the scenario is not a requirement to it being a good story - I loved Star Wars but I ain't gonna be no Jedi any day soon lol.
about this pair of plonkers...the things they do and get up to are no longer interesting or amusing....time to bury them....