by Randomguy664
i love this story and i hope you continue with it i want to read more .
Another good story ... well written, nice rhythm, nice balance between hot and sexy and a baseline of human connection. Good stuff!
A great many authors who post on here kinda get caught up on their dialogue. This one, however had hardly any at all - mostly narrative. I’m hoping you’re still writing, even if it’s not on this platform.
I read these all the time and I haven’t enjoyed one this much in awhile. Refreshing - Thank you!