All Comments on 'I Once Was Blind...'

An excellent story,well written and with well formed characters.

Nicely written but it has a weak ending.

Nice mix of titulation and story line, although it did end a little quickly. More mutual exploration would have been nice, to draw it out. I, personally, don't like the slam-bam stories.

Oh, and thank you so much for the good spelling and grammar.

great story. I think hammer should have found them and came to her rescue, kicked his every-lovin ass

That was a great story you wrote about Doris and how she overcame her blindness and became a well-rounded young woman. I like how she and Michael/hammer learned about each others bodies and gave each other their virginity. Like it has been said before the end he was weak with Jerome coming into the laundry room and raping her. I did like how his mother came into the laundry room and saved her from her asshole son. I still would like to see more of how Doris and Michael developed as a couple and maybe write another story about them. I do like that she was given free rent for her apartment for year. I hope you write a sequel

There is nothing wrong with the ending, it written so the next chapter can follow on, right???

One of the best stories I have read on here in the years I have read stories. It is original, full of suspense and wonderfully told. You had me captivated the entire time. Thanks

Deep and intensively intimate in its entirety.<P>

A read in a different arena done with reality and sensitivity.<P>

Your efforts are very much appreciated Author.<P>

With Very High Regard

perfectly sweet story if that was so good i can only wait for more

Absolutely fantastic. I will remember that one for awhile and probably will read it a few more times to see how you pulled it off. Amazing. Were it not so late I'd try to write a more thoughtful comment.

I wished I could have rated it a 6 or 10.

The characters were so real! The plot line was straight and true AND believable. The dialog really carried the characters forward and solidified their personalities. But your sensitivity to everything is what makes it stand out. Doris grows, Michael grows and Jerome gots wooped! I thought the ending was strong not weak. I liked the fact that his mother was the one who intervened. It makes Jerome all the less of a man!

If you can write some more like this you'll have the site croaking your name.

This actually was a rather sweet story. Surprisingly imaginative, too. Don't know if you are blind or know someone intimately who is, but you made me imagine(sense) something about the way the world would be perceived by someone, especially a young women, who lacks the sense of sight(who has more heightened non-visual senses).

I once volunteered with Reading for the Blind(or some name like that)where we made audio tapes. I wonder if this story could be made available to the blind community in some way. They might appreciate it more than we sighted folks. I'll bet little erotica gets translated into Braille or audio formats.

It's a great story and I hope there is a follow up to it, I enjoyed reading it very much.

I liked it a bunch.

You had a great build-up, but I needed more gratification when I got to the sex. It was way too fast.

Well, the request "don't make me pregnant" with the answer "I won't cum inside of you" is the stupiest thing ever, even pre-cum can make a woman pregnant.

And the feel for his body and sex scene were way too fast.

However, 4/5 stars.

That was a great story and told with such are and attention to detail.

You have a wonderful mind and ability to get these words together so nicely.

Thank for a great read.

nigelrlane@fsmail.net

Lovely to finally read a story with proper grammar and spelling. I also think, especially with all the reading Doris had done, she would certainly know that the withdrawal method offers little protection against pregnancy. Other than that, I enjoyed this.

I dated a blind woman some years back, and thoroughly enjoyed the memories this brought back.

Well thought out, but I think you had a similar experience.

A very different type of story. I love your imagination and your writing. Write MORE.

fantassy

Amazing sensous plot woven very well arousing the reader totally and feel as if its me there