by kimbalee
This was a very hot, straight-forward story. What really made it was how appealing and likeable a pair of characters you created.
A wonderful story. Well written, mostly believable. Two nice characters. But, twelve years and this is the first time she's tasted his cum? He doesn't eat pussy or drink all that beautiful juice she releases? Come on, they each would have had at least a taste from a finger just out of curiousity.haha A prim and proper wife who is a sex slut after hours, a wonderful thought. I do hope you will continue to write about you and your husband. Loved jacking off as I read and pictured the two of you enjoying sex.
Loved your story. I could imagine . . . oh, I better stop. Good title.
A rare glimpse into married sex between two loving people, excellent craftsmanship and a lovely insight to what it might take to make a long term relationship successful and interesting.
The wordplay before hand, the familiarity, the comfort and ease with which they go about things, a delight to read.
Thank you...
Amicus...
This was very realistic. I could see this happen. Hell, I've had something like this happen very recently. :)
Good work!
In some ways you captured my life, and yet the sexier bits are what I wish I could live. Great job!
I loved this story! The set-up generated interest, the flow into the sex scene was smooth, and the description of the action was extremely erotic. Excellent!
I liked the tension building, the uncertainty if she would fulfill her promise, and the great end. Good work!
Wow! I'm not sure what I want to say! I'm thinking of words liked "puddle" and "flooded". Oh boy... Alrighty then! Where was I? Give me a sec while I get my head out of this story so I can talk. I liked the details. I live on details. The manicure was a nice touch, and not forgetting to mention bringing scrachy cuticles up at dinner was frosting for the cake. Nice, Nice, Nice. Just how loud DO you scream?
The action in this story is so intense that it is impossible for the reader not to feel it as well. wonderfully written. One of the hottest scenes I have read in a long time. Great writing Kim!
I hope I don't have to wait another 5 years for you to write more GREAT stories...
Ace