All Comments on 'I Really DID Need a Vacation!'

by wantsomefun1951

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NamedayNamedayalmost 14 years ago
ok,

Even though she's cheated on him.. i'm still curious as to how and what happened to her after they found out...but you don't have to write a story about it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
guess it's vacation time

don't understand why your story has only one comment. Its good and encouraging to believe in the "right" thing. Thanks

RubthedubRubthedubalmost 14 years ago

Very good story ....... looking forward to the 2nd dinner date and some hot Anal!

RockyRatRockyRatalmost 14 years ago
Bravo!

Great story. I thought that were going to experience the usual mopey angst of a poor-poor jilted lover. I enjoyed the pleasant break from the mold. Great story and a great ending--thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Excellent story

Good development and great ending - definitely a two or three part story.

I hope they actually get together. They sound better than Bob & the ex (Karen).

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 14 years ago
Your best yet.

Thank you.

Scorpio44Scorpio44almost 14 years ago
Where did he go on vacation?

I want to rent that villa. I know just who to invite to go with me. She reminds me of the heroine of your story. Well done. Nicely crafted and fun to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Excellent!!

One of the most enjoyable stories I've read here in a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Definitely a FIVE!!

I really enjoyed this. Good character development and hot sex! What more could a person want? Gualterio

oldergentleman69oldergentleman69over 12 years ago

A very well written story! Lost of hot steamy good old fashioned SEX!

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 11 years ago
It wouldn't let mevote so here is your FIVE STARS...

Good hot sex and I like happy endings. I would like to have seen a little more revenge but I cannot complain.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassalmost 11 years ago
Great vacation story

Now that Kevin and Marianne met on vacation, they'll need another one to recuperate from the wild sex they've had. That could keep going on forever--leading to more great stories. I really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
What...

... a fun little romp! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Vacation cont?

Great story, really enjoyed them getting their type of revenge on the cheaters. Would really like to see the rest of the story. They should live happily ever after.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Why did she giggle so much? Great story though, chapter 2?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
WOW

That was a great one.

Really, really great.

Hot, hot story.

And so well written.

I've actually quit reading sex scenes because they felt so plastic, made up, unnatural.

No danger of that here.

While I knew it was make-believe, it all just flowed naturally, making fantasy feel real.

Paul in Oklahoma

Oldsofty1961Oldsofty1961over 2 years ago

Rough start very emotional to end up caring and full of love % star .

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77almost 2 years ago

Well-written, thanks!

maninconnmaninconnover 1 year ago
Great story!

Thanks for writing!

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