All Comments on 'I See Brucey Knickerbocker's Dick'

by EllenMelville

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lcluckylcluckyalmost 7 years ago
Fantastic

I really enjoyed this story. The twists and turns were well planned and well written. I could visualize every event. Do they get married? Is there more to cum? I hope so.

EllenMelvilleEllenMelvillealmost 7 years agoAuthor
This is one of the first stories

in my book, "The Slave Girl in 'Spartacus' or Can A Classy Girl Get Laid?" Available on Amazon. A few other stories here, too. Thanks for taking the time to comment!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
This has been posted before, hasn't it?

I am sure i have read this story before, was it posted under a different name?

EllenMelvilleEllenMelvillealmost 7 years agoAuthor
This was posted here briefly...

But then removed for violating the rule about 18 years old. I grew up the characters and resubmitted.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
should have been tagged humor

I was surprised this didn't have a humor tag. It was hilarious. I would have made humor the primary tag.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
A very enjoyable tale!

One can imagine how close to the truth you came in the telling of this first time sordid tale of seduction. Outstanding!

EllenMelvilleEllenMelvilleabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks, Anonymous!

For this latest comment. I went through a brief period, there, where I felt inspired almost to the point of mania. I wrote some things I think are among my best. Another one, I think, was about the cardiac nurse.

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