by EllenMelville
I really enjoyed this story. The twists and turns were well planned and well written. I could visualize every event. Do they get married? Is there more to cum? I hope so.
in my book, "The Slave Girl in 'Spartacus' or Can A Classy Girl Get Laid?" Available on Amazon. A few other stories here, too. Thanks for taking the time to comment!
I am sure i have read this story before, was it posted under a different name?
But then removed for violating the rule about 18 years old. I grew up the characters and resubmitted.
I was surprised this didn't have a humor tag. It was hilarious. I would have made humor the primary tag.
One can imagine how close to the truth you came in the telling of this first time sordid tale of seduction. Outstanding!
For this latest comment. I went through a brief period, there, where I felt inspired almost to the point of mania. I wrote some things I think are among my best. Another one, I think, was about the cardiac nurse.