All Comments on 'I See You'

I find that the simplest stories on this site are often the best and yours is no exception. Well done! Hope to hear more from you in the future.

Wonderful little story. Rich with subtlety, emotion, and sensuality.

The ending was nice, but it could be disturbing. Nothing between them was ever loud until the knocking on the door. I feel you intended to portray need, want, or desire, but that was out of character. My initial thought was it was a cop, or perhaps Sarah was angry or even psycho. The ending was nice, however.

The bisexuality was a nice twist, unexpected, and appropriate. What I did not feel, except for the deeper and continued relationship, was a difference. Just an observation, not a criticism.

As another comment mentioned, simple is good. I have a feeling, however, that you think on many levels, and you contemplate deeply. You're much too introspective to be truly simple.