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Click hereAfter, we lie in each other's arms. Hours kissing, touching, stroking. Holding each other, saying nothing, Later we're kissing again and our hands creep between each others legs. Our eyes lock once more as we move slowly and gently at first. Then speeding up. Holding each other tightly. You gasp raggedly in my ear, "I see you. You're mine." then I'm cumming like I've never cum before in my life. When the world returns. I pull you hard to me and return the favour. When you're right on the edge I whisper "I'm yours." and you fall over the edge as I hold you tight, a wide grin on my face.
Sleep.
The next day is Saturday. I'm up before you and make breakfast. We both shower, separately, and then you get dressed. Things don't feel weird or awkward. By mid morning you say you should probably go home. I walk you to the door. You cup my face and pull my lips to yours, "you're mine". I look you deep in the eyes and you know it's true.
After you've stepped onto the landing I call out after you, "Sarah". You turn back to look at me. A heartbeat. Two. "Naomi". Then you're gone.
That night I keep the curtains closed.
The next night, around 2am you're woken by a loud knock at your door. Stumbling to open it you find me there.
"I see you."
- COMMENTS
john_sixfooterover 7 years agoWonderful little story. Rich with subtlety, emotion, and sensuality.
The ending was nice, but it could be disturbing. Nothing between them was ever loud until the knocking on the door. I feel you intended to portray need, want, or desire, but that was out of character. My initial thought was it was a cop, or perhaps Sarah was angry or even psycho. The ending was nice, however.
The bisexuality was a nice twist, unexpected, and appropriate. What I did not feel, except for the deeper and continued relationship, was a difference. Just an observation, not a criticism.
As another comment mentioned, simple is good. I have a feeling, however, that you think on many levels, and you contemplate deeply. You're much too introspective to be truly simple.
Anonymousover 7 years agoI find that the simplest stories on this site are often the best and yours is no exception. Well done! Hope to hear more from you in the future.
