by Erinbear
I suppose this was too short for most, but then it pretty much said what you wanted it to in the space you used. It was in and of itself a glimpse into the life of two people who share a moment every night. If you are into the voyeur part of life then this was a voyeur moment. For that I say thanks. As for those who knock it... why are you doing that as Anonymous? I think that speaks volumes about you.
Great job, very concise you were able to convey the urge and the longing, and you still left lots for the imagination.
This story defines the difference between erotica and pornography.
Anonymous, go elsewhere for porn