by jeninflorida
Strange but I didn't enjoy it at the beginning. Then after reading the complete story and thinking about it. I did. I think because it is different. Normally the wife betrayed the house. Or the husband is left at home waiting. This time he joined in. I am not that type of guy. But some of my friends are and they are very happy. I hope you do more in this story and let them enjoy there adventure together. Let Mike guide glen in to new pleasure with his wife.
He has been banned ?....Why.? Anyone know.
This was one hot and sexy story. Will there be a part 4 with Mike and Glen?
3 part story I have ever read. I could not stop reainf them until I finished them all
Did that really happen or is it just fiction? I'd love to have a wife like that. My wife used to be like that but things changed.
As an erotic story - pretty hot. I liked her thoughts about wanting it and that it was "arranged". And the hubby's enjoyment - good move.
As a writer - there are some typos that were a bit of a distraction. There are a few places too that you could think about visuals and sensations. Give us something to help us visualize you, and him. And give us something to let us feel (as a first person narrator) what it felt like.
You kept me so sensually tense through the whole story that I feel exhausted now that I've finished reading it.
So erotic Jen.
Your admirer,
Nesher
A wonderfully erotic story that has me wanting more. That's the sign of a fine writer. Thanks for sharing your talent.
I hope this is real had a hard cock reading all of it. Keep up the work, your really wondeful.
To Hell with those idiots that cannot enjoy how wonderful it is to share.
I thunk those trolls that are complaining about your story are Cuckolds themselves, hahaha.
This is a great story! This chapter is by far the best, however all were very good. I'm looking forward to more chapters. However, I would like to see Glen take less of a wimp role.
I think glen will slowly be eased out of the sex with his wife. her pussy is already her bosses, and glen is just the waiter.
Gary