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All Comments on 'I Thought I Was Unlucky'

by anonymiousiam

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good Build up!

Good and slow build up! Later part could have been a little unhurried though. Please correct the occasional spelling errors - such as in the last line toady for today, etc.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Well done.

Loved your story, it is a very good start to what should be a great story. Please post the next chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

very good!!!!

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