All Comments on 'I Thought We Were More Ch. 15'

Are you not going to add more?

I've got almost thirty chapters written but with all the negativity about the story's change in direction I've been debating whether to re write it or continue with what I already have written. I will post Ch. 17 soon. After all it is the chapter that introduces thecharacter my screen name is named after, the mysterious and sexually strange Dr. Electrogasm

I'd like to see you continue. The plot twist was jarring at first, but now I'm getting into where you're going with this. It may have been a better idea to have thrown in some hints here and there about Heather and the organization she was part of in the chapters before the twist. Had you done that, it probably wouldn't have seemed so out of left field. As it was, it seemed to come out of nowhere.