All Comments on 'I Want You'

Great beginning.. so look forward to more ..

Does this female character have it bad. That is certainly a new take on 'take all of me.' Writer you describe your scenes in quite a graphic way. By the way, if your male character ever needs a friend; let him buy a dog. Oh, sorry, I forgot...he already has one.

As is becoming habit I very much enjoyed your submission (now there's a pun to die for...)