All Comments on 'I Want You, Mr Brooks'

Great start, I would have given a 5 he had cum in her pussy instead of on her face

great story, although I doubt even an experienced man like Mr. Brooks would deny himself the chance to cum inside Natalie's once-virgin pussy. can't help but hope a little that's what he'll be doing in what sounds like a not so secret sequel.

I'm not as concerned as the other commentators about face versus pussy, in fact I think it represented perfect submission. Like them though I'm absolutely looking forwards to a sequel. You're an author I'm now following, thank you...

Really liked it. Was hoping he would have had her sit or lay on the desk to eat her before fucking her. But that's my fetish, I could let my man to down on me for hours ;) .