All Comments on 'I was Scott Tenna'

I wandered through your story, hoping that at some point it would become coherent. That never happened. The syntax, grammar, and spelling of the English you use makes me think that either English is not your primary language [and that's fine], or your command of it is juvenile at best. You need to get some help with both language & story structure.

A very poor translator I guess. A very hard read.

Very good story so far... I can easily look past the grammar and see what you are saying... please continue

One correct the spelling mistakes it looks odd. Two make a second and or third chapter detailing them all undergoing srs to become true mtfs

And set it so they all get new lives in general as this seems most like the Hostel movies and the human centipede movies. Which are both sick and degrading films . Thanks for your time :)

truly a great story, the grammar makes it hard to read, altho still easy to ollow the story, schedule me in.

The appalling grammar detract from what might have been a reasonable tale.

I'm loving it. This sooooo falls into one of my fantasies where I'm stopped, leaving a pub, by a small group being lead by two aggressive women. One is a nurse. I'm bound/gagged, they humiliate me and laugh at my little clit. Then saying that, since I want to be a female, they proceed to make me one as the nurse injects my scrotum and the other female removes my testicle saying that my balls belong to her. 😘