All Comments on 'I Wasn't The Only One'

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Ron-SanRon-Sanover 11 years ago
Well done.

Looking forward to more. Very nice start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Interesting idea and I really enjoyed it. Stephanie and our "not creepy" narrator were hot together. Hope to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

All too rarely does someone come up with an innovative story line. You have, congratulations.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Not bad.

Sex was hot and doing it in Sara's room was a nice twist. Good job

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