All Comments on 'I Will Always Be There For You'

I really liked this story. More to come??? :-)

But if there's ay way to edit the story afterwards, please change fertile/infertile to fertilized/unfertilized. There's a huge difference: Fertile means able to have offspring (so that'd mean the eggs would be ready to have eggs themselves), while fertilized is the word you were looking for.

Hey wake the hell up you've already posted this chapter once before. Then you reposted it again the very next day. I like what you have got down so far but you really need to work on your writing skills. With the same chapter being posted the second time are you smoking marijuana or on crack or something. Get your head out of your butt and back on your shoulders dum dum.

You've got a decent plot and interesting enough story to keep me reading but there's still a few things that are flat out annoying. I don't care what dimensions his penis is, or how much it grows by the numbers. Numbers in that area are a turnoff for me I can't stand it when someone is being overanalytical about sex. The other annoying thing is how certain things you drag on and on and on. Grammatical errors get fixed through time and practice. So far you've got a great thing going keep it up.