All Comments on 'I Wish She Hadn't Ch. 01'

I am going to be really disappointed if they don't end up together though. Thanks.

But I have to concur with ender2k2k, the overall value of the story will be tied with them ending up together. Curious as what you will devise for them falling apart in chapter 2.

I really admire the way you build your characters, a lot of time devoted to psychological character development. To my mind, that is the most interesting vehicle by which to navigate sexual interrelationships that can then be explored in honest, creative & erotic ways. I like these two. Nicely done!

I can myself identify with the dilemma of having a young lover whose affections are over-the-top and thus tended to derail an otherwise promising relationship. Besides a realistic plot, the dialogue and characterization are adroit, clever, and witty. A finely wrought tale whose sequel is highly anticipated. 5 stars.

Another gem from one of the better writers on this site. Great sex, creative dialogue, and enough plot twists to keep things interesting. Keep 'em cumming!.