All Comments on 'I Won the Big Prize'

by Paniolo Boy

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mammoetmammoetover 7 years ago
great story

it took some time getting used to the telegram kind of writing but then it was a 5* experience

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
excellent

I was a little perturbed by the 'dialect' initially, but then I recalled the bit of Japanese I had picked up over 50 years ago, and understood that while the language can be poetic and subtle, when translated literally, you have it right. So, gomennasai, Paniolo, or since I am over 70, I should say, 'sumimasen, Boy-san'. Lovely story.

teedeedubteedeedubover 7 years ago
delightful

Thanks for sharing.

Freddog6601Freddog6601about 6 years ago
Enjoyable read

Thank you for a warm, entertaining story on a rainy spring day.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Very well written nice pace and good intro to characters. Loved this story

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

A really, really nice story. AAAA++++

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Thank you for this beautifully written story. I appreciate the values you convey and the gentleness of your spirit. You are a gift that I am sure is deeply cherished.

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