All Comments on 'Iced Flip Side'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ah

That was a really sweet yet sad ending and a good idea for a story. I think the idea could have gone really far but the extensive repetition ruined it for me. Well done anyway. x

patientleepatientleealmost 11 years ago
This is a fun story!

Love the two perspectives.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...