All Comments on 'I'd Have Had to Miss the Dance'

by HeliosLumina

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
What's Next

Well now, I realize this chapter was rather short, yet it sets in motion all the pre-requisites for a follow up chapter. Please do not disappoint us readers. Continue on with the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

A great start !! Direct and short but very arousing and eye opening !! We need some details about what they look like, details on other items and now to get a real HOT brother / sister story going. Big sis can teach her brother how and why and bring him out of his shyness. Once she gets him there, they can really enjoy each other and then some. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Anachronism

When the brother of the story was 18 it was 1992. We still had diskettes that saved info on our computers; no "porn folders" from the internet and no dvd's. When I was in graduate school ('94-'96) the librarians said the university would be getting something called the internet which would allow us to read newspapers online and find out the weather in different parts of the world. We had no idea of the possibilities of the internet at that time.

sabra16023sabra16023almost 9 years ago
Next Chapter

Waiting to see what next chapter brings. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wow

What happened????? I need more.

goldponygoldponyalmost 9 years ago
hmmmmm

Now that you have introduced us, tell us the rest of the story. And maybe Fifteen years later they get back together to live out the best of the story. Mrs.Kay sounds like a thinker.....maybe she thinks to much, and just needs to "feel" for the rest of the story. GP

prop69prop69over 4 years ago
Awesome story for a brother and sister

Can't wait for the next chapter, but I am wondering about the 7 years.

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