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Click hereNow all that remained to be done was to return to the bar and explain Nadia's absence to the friend. He would tell the little brunette that 'Arley' had rushed to the side of a mutual friend upon learning that she was in trouble and had asked for Arley. He was certain that the girl waiting back in the bar would believe her - it was entirely within Arley's character. With luck, no one would realize that his prize was missing until sometime tomorrow, at which point she would be safely hidden.
He turned to head back to the pub, but then paused. Looking back around at the girl again, he frowned slightly. Something was off. His eyes raked over her again, trying to pinpoint the cause of his uncertainty. Slowly, and without removing his gaze from the unconscious girl before him, he drew the little square photograph from his pocket once more. He then studied it again, looking back back and forth from the photographed girl to the live one. She was identical to the woman in the photo, the same turbulent curls, the same blue eyes. The same height and same slim build. Even the expression of the woman in the picture as she glanced over her shoulder felt familiar to Michael, and he knew he recognized it from seeing it on Arley's - no, Nadia's - face. It had to be her.
"Hey man, we good to go?"
Michael slipped the picture away again and turned to face Daniel, who had come around to the back of the car. Chris and Mark were already inside the car, waiting.
"Yes. Take her to the house and get her set up. I'll be there in a bit, I have to head off her friend."
Daniel strode around the car and entered the back seat as Michael took one last glance at the girl in the trunk before he swung the lid down in one firm movement, hiding her from sight.
Too much resembling actual assault and abuse to be an arousing story of dominance to me. A Dom turns me on, a criminal/bully turns me off. I prefer my non-con more "fantasy" based with elements of seduction and humour, like "slave to the servants" or "the mountain". But I realise that's all a matter of personal preference and to each their own. So, best of luck: to infinity and beyond, I'll just hop off the ride.
Thanks for the favourites and comments! Ch. 02 has finally been submitted to Literotica and so I'm hoping it will be published soon.
...but you need to watch your pacing. It's all a bit too fast and slick.
This happened, then this happened, then this happened. Bang, bang, bang - there's no respite anywhere.
Get that all figured out and you could be on a real winner with this.